Aahrenwold pt. 1

Fiction By Aalen Fideli // 6/3/2011

Chapter 1

Kalen looked around. He was getting a serious feeling of deja vu. There was the stone wall, the tree, the tall grass, the dragon and a faint bit of music.
A song he had heard before. there were words sometimes. it went: "flower burning, midnight bright. moonlit ocean of the night. dragons sing and walk with you. remember nothing save the tune."
All very random.
But still he remembered; all of this was the same. Even what he was wearing was the same: light brown boots, heavy canvas pants, a white shirt and a bandolier with a bag attached. Kalen didn't need to open the bag; he knew what was inside: pencils, paints, brushes and paper.
He felt, along with the deja vu, that he needed to do something.
So he started painting.


The dragon blinked. A primary keeper of the Wall it was his job to protect it from attack. however, the boy did not seem to pose any immediate threat.
Stretching his wings, the dragon turned and flew off toward the tree. that was the next point on his patrol routine. before he was halfway though, he turned back to look at the boy; He seemed to be poking a piece of parchment.
What strange things these humans do.
As the dragon landed in the tree a thought came to him; it is because of the strangeness of humans that he needed to protect the Wall.


The painting was nearly done. the only thing left was to sign it. Kalen of Aahrenwold. what a strange name, but at the same time it was his own.
He looked at the picture. a nearly perfect likeness of the dragon that was here earlier. "i wonder where it went?" Kalen thought. "But" he thought "it doesnt really matter".
After all, he wasn't about to go pet the dragon.


Interesting :)

 I like this :D I think there were two sentences where you didn't capitalize the first letter, but other than that, I don't think there was anything else. Please write more!

Laura Elizabeth | Sat, 06/04/2011

The best stories are those that are focused, unassuming, and self-confident enough to trust the reader to figure things out. --


Ditto! Very Interesting!

I like it!

I will read more as soon as possible! Your writing is very interesting... very strange but creative. As if... you right about dreams and really random topics! This on the other hand seems like a deja vu story... same confusion of being there, same dragon that thinks humans are weird. I do not mean to inssult you with my bluntness! Sorry! But I'm just noticing simuliar traits... but I will go on reading! I highly advise you start capitilizing, just like I should advise myself to start spelling correctly ;)

Good job! I will read more as soon as I can!

Write on!


Kassady | Sat, 07/23/2011

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
Write On!

thank you

this is probably one of the best comments ever. thank you so much!

Aalen Fideli | Sun, 07/24/2011

Music I created