way of the flipside

A Poem By Aalen Fideli // 4/1/2011

riding a cloud, unconventional,

flying out loud, interdimensional,

run, jump, fly, come along for the ride.

I'm gonna see you on the flipside.

(chorus)

dancing in the fourth dimension,

step sideways between the particals,

there's no rain in zero gravity,

lost in thought, lost on the flipside.

 

alien ship, extraterrestrial,

major head trip, super fantastical,

laugh, cry, sing and spread your wings,

how off earth do you steer this thing.

(chorus)

dancing in the fourth dimension,

step sideways between the particals,

there's no rain in zero gravity,

lost in thought, lost on the flipside.

 

cross my heart and hope i don't die,

there's gonna be a party way up in the sky...

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wow

For some reason I had to re-read this several times because different lines kept grabbing my attention! It reminds me a great deal of the song Written in the Stars by Tinie Temphah...and Eric...whatever his last name is...

Sarah | Wed, 04/06/2011

"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca

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i honestly don't hear that

i don't think this sounds anything like written in the stars.

and i'm not shouting cause apparently you heard me out ;)

eric *turner*

Aalen Fideli | Mon, 05/09/2011

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awesome!

alien ship, extraterrestrial,

major head trip, super fantastical,

laugh, cry, sing and spread your wings,

how off earth do you steer this thing.

 

LOL! Those were my favorite lines! Very cute and creative! Keep it up! The lyrics sound like they could be in an Owl City song! LOL! But I liked this! It was different! I liked the wording and rythme!

(No offence, but do you ever use Capitals? I know! Sorry! I'm strange about that sort of thing! But I shouldn't be the one talking! My spelling is pretty bad most of the time!)

Well done!

Write on!

P.S. Cool Pic! Did you drawl that? Its super cool!

Kassady | Sun, 05/22/2011

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

thanks

No i usually don't use capitals. Sorry.

yeah i did the pic myself. i like drawing. :)

Aalen Fideli | Sun, 05/22/2011

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Neat!

Is it a hippogrif?

LOL! Its alright! I'm just wat too judgemental! Hehe!

Well done!

Write on!

Kassady | Sun, 05/22/2011

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

the reason i dont use Capitals is...

this poem was less of a shouty poem, if I were YELLING i would use a Capital or Two.

When i write a louder poem I'll use some Capitals.

Make sense?

Aalen Fideli | Fri, 05/27/2011

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