when I Start Typing...

A Poem By Aalen Fideli // 4/22/2012

(ooc: i literally am just going to start typing. hopefully something representative of my normally sentient nature will result)

Military robots run in circles round my brain
Their footsteps sound like catastrophic bombs and gentle rain
I haven't the intention to remove them from my cranium
They need a place to stay and play and I have one to give 'em.
My name is Ozymandias and I am made of stone
I now lie on the sand as nothing more is of my throne
Look on my works ye mighty, if you see them give them back
The only thing that's left of me is bragging on a plaque.
Tell me if you find my mind, I lost it yesterday
I had to do some homework so I let it out to play
I haven't seen it since but I would really like it back
(something should inserted be, but not about the plaque (see above))
I love poetry and music and art and stuff
All of these are my hobbies though there's never time enough
I can't release an album and be doodling half the day
I also have to do some school and find some time to play.
I want to end this poem cause it's getting rather long
Though it's nothing near the 52 stanzas of Walt Whitman's "song"
I've tried a couple things but nothing seems to fit quite right
So I leave you with a thought "make tomorrow something to write"
(about)

Comments

Nice rambling. A bit weird

Nice rambling. A bit weird though. But that's what rambling is, right?

I actually wanted to comment about your other published thing called Dear James with all the complaints you made. I looked for the comment button and it wasn't there, so I decided to just comment on this. I would have contacted you through email, but there wasn't a contact button. Do I actually have that on my account? I don't know.

First, I think having a picture posted with a post is a really good idea; I love to draw too! And hopefully I'm good at that... or having photos pasted with it would be good too.

Anyway, being able to change the back round colour would be great; blue just kinda gets a bit boring, though only sometimes.

But soundtracks would be a bit hard because of all the younger people on here. Also, some people might not agree with different types of music. But hey, I'm all for an option on the sidebar to listen to nature music, like a waterfall or something, or maybe classical music. But having actual songs on there might be argued about with all the argue topics you mentioned.

And I have no idea what a serial page is. Please, excuse my ignorance! I feel like a baby when I have to say that! I'd love you to get back to me! :D <3

Maddi | Mon, 08/20/2012

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

consider us equally ignorant

I had run out of posts when I wrote the "Dear James" letter so I used a series page; a free post meant for random non-content stuff like tables of contents and random quotes or stuff like that.
I agree that songs on your page would almost always be questionable in one way or another. Mostly I'm hoping for pictures, which I think you can include if you know HTML.

p.s. I've updated my page so you can contact me.

Aalen Fideli | Mon, 08/20/2012

Music I created
[updated]

Okay, so now I know what a

Okay, so now I know what a serial page is! Pictures would be great; I have know idea how to use HTML. Which really sucks because my profile edit won't put spaces between paragraphs even if I insert them twice.

I don't think I need to classify anything over email, because I've got all my questions answered! But thanks anyway. I think I put mine in too. :D <3

Maddi | Mon, 08/20/2012

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Maddi:

If you want to put spaces on your paragraphs using HTML, DO THIS.

< p > AT THE BEGINNING of the paragraph < / P > AT THE END of the paragraph.

Of course, you don't need to write the at the beginning/ at the end stuff. And DO NOT by any means put spaces for the < p > and < / p > like I am doing or it will not work. I am just doing it so it will not end up invisible. If you have any questions, just ask. :)

Oh and if you want an example of a series page, this is mine. http://apricotpie.com/lucy-anne/dream-just-dreamor-it-table-contents

You can practically do anything!

Hope this helps. :)

Lucy Anne | Mon, 08/20/2012

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

Lucy Anne

Thank you so much, Lucy Anne!

Okay, I'll try that. Being me though, it won't probably won't work; I have a tendency to muck up instructions over the phone or on the computer. Lol!

So, at the end of EACH paragraph? Just let me do an example:(I did not get what you meant by the spaces; did u mean don't put spaces between the < and the p? is that it?)

I like to walk my cat. Though nobody
takes me seriously.

OR

I like to walk my cat. Though nobody
takes me seriously.

Not sure if the last P is meant to be capital; but that's what you had up there.
Please get back to me and give a couple of examples; I'm one of those visual learners!!

God Bless <3

EDIT: I did it!! Thanks so much! Now I have to go aplogise to Arthur about sending him that email bothering him about my problem! Thankyou so much! :D

Maddi | Mon, 08/20/2012

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

:)

Sorry, I accidentally typed in the last "p" capital. It really doesn't matter if it's capital or not. Yes, every end of the paragraph, you would want to close the p by putting the slash in-- < / P > And yes, I meant I put spaces between the < > and p so you could see it. I'm glad I could help you! :)

Lucy Anne | Mon, 08/20/2012

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

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