Wind Whispers

A Poem By Aalen Fideli // 9/22/2012

I'm lost in a valley full of flowers and sun
I want to be out there and I only have to run

Mountains behind clouds enjoying the day
I'm too close to me but I'll never get away

Lost, but I like it and I'm staying where I am
As soon as I find myself I'll run away again

Can't stay here and I can't go home
I nearly died from loving being alone

Comments

There are some powerful

There are some powerful phrases in this poem. I really liked it. :) The rhythm was a bit off, but that's fine. Your poetry is really, really good!

Madeline | Sun, 09/23/2012

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

thanks...

I wrote this while spacing out, listening to some chilled DnB.
Two songs later I realized I was still not done with the poem so I rushed it.

Aalen Fideli | Tue, 09/25/2012

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:)

Love the valley full of flowers and sun and mountains and clouds--you painted a picture in my mind with only few words!

Lucy Anne | Thu, 10/04/2012

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

thanks

I just like putting my thoughts into words. It helps.

Aalen Fideli | Thu, 10/04/2012

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Nice.

I'm same as Homey; some very strong phrases. Good.

P.S. I clicked on your My Music link; and I love it! Absolutely love it! You didn't make them yourself, did you? :)

Maddi | Thu, 10/04/2012

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

I did

Yes, that's me. I make that stuff on my computer.

Aalen Fideli | Fri, 10/05/2012

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:0

No way...

Maddi | Sat, 10/06/2012

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

yes way

I've been doing it for about a year and a half now.

Aalen Fideli | Sat, 10/06/2012

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