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A Poem By Aisling // 11/5/2008

the leaves have caught the sun
and hold it boldly, bravely
and give it, all unwavering
even when it’s gone

the leaves have caught the light
they guard it like a secret
they treasure and they keep it
even through the night

the leaves have caught the glow
and mirroring each other
they paint the whole world over
refuse to let it go

the leaves have caught the sun
and play it ‘neath the blue sky
right back into the bright eye
of the one they caught it from

the leaves have caught the story
of this world's undying glory

Comments

WOW!

wow!! i really enjoyed this!
luv,
Bernadette

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"my brother, my captain, my king," Boromir.

Bernadette | Wed, 11/05/2008

Great poem! It is

Great poem! It is baeutiful.

"....So we're all men of our word, really, except Elizabeth who is in fact a woman." Captain Jack Sparrow

The Brit | Thu, 11/06/2008

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Aisling, I especially love the first two stanzas. Good job! :)

Brianna | Thu, 11/06/2008

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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa

Gorgeous.

Gorgeous.

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"Ever heard of Plato, Aristotle, Socrates?...Morons."
-Vizzini

Clare Marie | Thu, 11/06/2008

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Whoa.

Lovely poem, as usual. :)

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"Weddings? I love weddings! Drinks all around!" -Jack Sparrow

Anna | Thu, 11/06/2008

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Beautiful!

Beautifully written! Awesome job!!! Lovely!!!

Elizabeth | Thu, 11/06/2008

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

Well...

Well, you may not have captured what you wanted to say, but you certainly captured something beautiful, as usual!
~Mary

Mary | Thu, 11/20/2008

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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!

Simply beautiful. This

Simply beautiful.

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"Never, never give up. Unless you get really tired." -Ellen Degenres

E | Tue, 03/24/2009

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

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