everything will love you

A Poem By Anna // 9/26/2012
love me and I will trust you

     with every drop, even the sweat
     over every skin cell, even the freckles
     on every finger, even the pointers

     with every word, even the warnings
     for every look, even the glares

     with every gift, even the wasted
     inside every box, even the empty
     hid in every room, even the locked

     with every tear, even the rips
     on every page, even the dog-eared

      with every wound, even the open
      showing every heartbeat, even the broken
      pumping every breath, even the last

trust me and I will love you

Comments

:)

This is absolutely gorgeous!

Emilee | Wed, 09/26/2012

A poem begins as a lump in the thoat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness -Robert Frost
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Wow, Anna. This is one of

Wow, Anna. This is one of your best yet. This has so much emotion in it. I love how...ugh...I can't think of the correct words! LOL! But how you listed things that are imperfect and made them beautiful! Good job.

Madeline | Wed, 09/26/2012

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

I love this. It is a really

I love this. It is a really beautiful poem, Anna. I especially love how you started and ended it. it is such a simple poem, yet hold so much meaning. I love it! :)

Elizabeth Anne | Wed, 09/26/2012

See him with his books:
Tree beside the brooks,
Drinking at the root
Till the branch bear fruit.
See him with his pen:
Written line, and then,
Better thought preferred,
Deep from in the Word.
~John Piper

Give me a moment to emerge

Give me a moment to emerge from my trance...
I really, really like this. Somehow, to me, it's like talking and like a song at the same time. And the mirroring of so many lines. The simplicity. Quite good. :)

Hannah W. | Thu, 09/27/2012

:)

'Tis a beautiful poem, Anna. I love how you described it in the middle and how you wrapped it up by reversing the first stanza. It reminds me of God, in some way--on how much He loves us. 'Tis so beautiful, great job! I could never write something like this so well. So simple, but message strikes.

p.s. When do you think you will be able to write more Out of Time? Or what do you plan to do now that we all voted on your blog? I think that even though I voted that I think you should rewrite it and then bring it all back, I think you should follow what you want to do. I just want more; I don't really mind in which way it's brought back.

Lucy Anne | Thu, 09/27/2012

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

I'm trying to think of

I'm trying to think of something to say other than "I love this; this is great!" but I can't. I feel like I could have read this in the greatest poems of the year book. :) Very meaningful.

"trust me and I will love you"

"with every gift, even the wasted
inside every box, even the empty
hid in every room, even the locked"

Those are the best bits, I reckon.

Maddi | Sat, 09/29/2012

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Hello, my friends.

I wish I'd been able to reply to you all sooner, but I just want to let you know that I loved reading your comments on this piece. You've encouraged me greatly after the recent feeling that I couldn't turn out any good writing.

@Lucy Anne: I think I'll go with the top result on the poll. It seems better to me to get the whole thing worked out. Just keep reminding me to write it!

Anna | Wed, 10/10/2012

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

To Remind You

Well, here I am--reminding you! Four days ago is a month....hope you are working on it....... :)

Lucy Anne | Wed, 11/14/2012

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

Very powerful!

Very powerful!

Sarah Bethany | Mon, 11/17/2014

I don't know how I missed

I don't know how I missed this from 2 years ago, haha. This is lovely.

Erin | Tue, 11/18/2014

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

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