Blue Balloons

A Poem By Ariel // 11/15/2010


Raindrops in my hair;

Cold stillness in the air.

The bugle notes pierce

Our hearts; beating fierce.

People; faces; words;

Distant; like southern birds.

Smiling to hide the fear;

Not meeting eyes clear.

Raindrops in my hair;

Blue balloons the wind bear.

The string slides though my hand

Rising high above the land.

People; faces; words.

I watch dangling cords.

Long after they’re gone I stare

Yet not with despair.

Raindrops in my hair.

Blue balloons; sun flair.

The beams burst through;

Inside, tears run true.


Oh, it's lovely, Ariel (haha,

Oh, it's lovely, Ariel (haha, it still seems odd not calling you Old Fashioned Girl!).

Annabel | Tue, 11/16/2010

 This is beautiful darling.

 This is beautiful darling.

Renee | Thu, 11/18/2010

Yo A, was a-up?

How ya doin'? I need to put somthing up on here. I was surprised to see you had some new stuff.

I am Nate-Dude | Mon, 12/13/2010



This is wonderful you are a great writer i wish i could write like you.



mjr101 | Tue, 12/20/2011


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