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A poem by Brianna | 4/15/2008

At the end now
falling down now
giving up now
all for you

Changed and broken
left and shaken
now awakened
to your love

Peace has washed me
clean of worry
all of me
is all for you, and
one day coming
I'll come running
home

Age: 17

| Wed, 04/16/2008 - 5:13am

Beautiful! I see the Father with open arms waiting.
I am Madeline L.'s Omie

Timothy | Thu, 04/17/2008 - 5:21pm

I like the hurried feel, which you have gotten quite good at. :)

Aisling | Mon, 04/21/2008 - 4:51pm

It's beautiful, Brianna. The flow is stunning and flawless. Good work.

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Brianna | Tue, 04/22/2008 - 3:18pm

Thanks guys. =)

Beautiful!

Elizabeth | Fri, 04/25/2008 - 2:44pm

Beutifully written!

Velocity | Fri, 05/16/2008 - 11:13am

Nice poem :)

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