Little mouse... who bursts into flames every time he eats cheese - A bedtime story.

Fiction By Bridget // 8/16/2011

Once upon a time, there was a little mouse. And this little mouse, like all good mice, liked cheese. Unfortunately for this mouse, every time he ate cheese, he burst into flames. Now, this mouse didn’t like to burst into flames, so he went to visit the Wicked Witch of Wherever (having established that the other Wicked Witches were killed by Dorothy), but she told him that she wouldn’t help him, because, you see, she was evil, and she didn’t do those things. So the little mouse went to see Aragorn, and Aragorn said that if the little mouse would help him to help Frodo take the One Ring across the – the – the place where they take One Rings, he would give him a potion to keep him from bursting into flames when he ate cheese. This is a true story, by the way. So, the little mouse picked up a sword and went across Middle-Earth – which I just remembered is the place people take One Rings across – but unfortunately he didn’t make it all the way across. Instead he got stuck in Osgiliath and had to fight orcs! The little mouse decided he didn’t like fighting orcs, so he hid under the city, but since he didn’t keep his promise to Aragorn, Aragorn never gave him the potion, and the little mouse never ate cheese again for as he lived.



WOW. That Very detailed. I'm sure little children would love to hear such a tale before bedtime. I love it. Haha....

Clare | Tue, 08/16/2011

Yeah, I made it up impromptu

Yeah, I made it up impromptu because my brother asked me to tell him a story... and that's what happened.  Glad you liked it! :-)

Bridget | Tue, 08/16/2011

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya

 haha! Marvellous! I do love

 haha! Marvellous! I do love making up impromtu stories. I can't help feeling sorry for the poor mouse though.  No cheese is a harsh punishment. :(

Renee | Tue, 08/16/2011

Ha ha!

 So cute :D

Laura Elizabeth | Wed, 08/17/2011

The best stories are those that are focused, unassuming, and self-confident enough to trust the reader to figure things out. --

Epic. Random. Love it.

Epic. Random. Love it.

Although...this might scare kids a little bit. ;)))

Madeline | Sat, 09/03/2011

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

Awww, a delightful bedtime

Awww, a delightful bedtime story :) lol, I love it!

E | Sun, 09/11/2011

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Thanks everyone!

Thanks everyone!

Bridget | Tue, 09/13/2011

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya


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