Falling Under

A Poem By Caitlyn // 11/3/2007

Awakening

From this dream

Fading

From your eyes

Oh so cold

Hold me close

And I'll

Sing to you tonight

Do I even look alive?

'Cause I feel so dead inside

Yeah

Do I even look alive?

'Cause I feel so cold inside.

Please take hold of me tonight.

And I know I'll be alright.

Before you know

The story goes in another direction

Maybe there's more to this

Another line to say.

Take my hand

Lead me by

The still waters

Oh

Take me there

To that place

Where I can finally have peace.

Do I even look alive?

'Cause I feel so dead inside

Yeah

Do I even look alive?

'Cause I feel so cold inside.

Please take hold of me tonight.

I am sure I'll be alright.

Do I even look alive?

Comments

?? :)

is this a song?
:)

Velocity | Sat, 11/03/2007

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The Truth will set you free.

even if its not, it's still

even if its not, it's still beautiful

Sarah | Sat, 11/03/2007

"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca

Blogging away!
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mhmm

Yep it sure is ^^

Anonymous | Sun, 11/04/2007

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:o) pretty! I would think it's a song....but thats just me.

Emily | Sun, 11/04/2007

beautiful

"Hold me close
And I'll
Sing to you tonight"

I love that.
Even though it ends kind of sadly.
~Anna

Anonymous | Mon, 11/05/2007

This is good!

Thats good... well i guess i comented a while back but now i read it again! :)

Velocity | Sat, 04/12/2008

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The Truth will set you free.

Coolio!

I like it!

Falling Leaves-unschooler, horse lover, and obsesser over writing, reading and proper grammar.

Erin | Thu, 09/11/2008

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

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