Autumn

A poem by Clare D | 2/27/2008

The pretty leaves come floating down
Upon the chilly breeze,
Reminding me of butterflies
Dancing with the bees.

The trees are all a red, orange and gold;
Nature's firework display.
Splashes of color shine brilliantly
Around me as I play.

But all too soon the snow comes down;
The trees all lose their sheen.
At least in my mind I have secure
A gorgeous Autumn scene.

Age: 13

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Emily | Wed, 02/27/2008 - 10:12pm

I love the pretty little picture it paints in my mind! Job well done! :)
~eMiLy~

Thanks!!!

Clare D | Thu, 02/28/2008 - 10:14am

Thanks!!!

Elizabeth | Thu, 02/28/2008 - 12:07pm

Dear Clare,

Wonderful writing! Beautiful! I love it!

Elizabeth

Clare D | Thu, 02/28/2008 - 6:13pm

Thanks, Elizabeth!!

Ezra | Thu, 02/28/2008 - 9:33pm

I'll be waiting for winter, spring, and summer.

Brianna | Fri, 02/29/2008 - 1:02pm

Very nice, Clare.

| Fri, 02/29/2008 - 9:03pm

Thanks, all of you!!!

oops

Clare D | Tue, 03/04/2008 - 12:23pm

Whoops! I think I posted the above as a comment, not a reply. Thanks!!!

aaagh...

Clare D | Tue, 03/04/2008 - 12:27pm

I realized that I posted my apology twice, so now I have to edit this one so there aren't two of them. I am so bad with computers!!!

Angela | Thu, 07/17/2008 - 5:53pm

I LOVE IT CLARE!!!!! It was great! You are a Really good wrighter.

thank you

Clare D | Thu, 07/17/2008 - 8:05pm

Thanks Angela!!
Welcome to Apricotpie!! I think you'll like it here. :)

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