Carry On

A Poem By Damaris Ann // 10/13/2015

When life is rough it's hard to be tough,
But we must carry on.
We must remember that He is enough;
So we can carry on.
He has given the strength that we need
To bravely carry on.
So we will run and joyfully speed
Our cross to carry on.

Comments

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Hey! Nice message :)
Very short, but good. It took me a few (five!) reads to get the rhythm, but once I had it it was great :)

Maddi | Wed, 10/14/2015

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Thank you Maddi! Also, I

Thank you Maddi! Also, I haven't forgotten you. :) I've been meaning to email you for a while now. I promise I will!

Damaris Ann | Wed, 10/14/2015

My thoughts are not your thoughts, neither are your ways my ways, saith the Lord. For as the heavens are higher than the earth, so are my ways higher than your ways, and my thoughts than your thoughts.
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭55:8-9‬

A great reminder of a

A great reminder of a poem!
The only thing is the rhythm is sort of off on the third line.

Arthur | Wed, 10/14/2015

"My greatest wish for my writing is that it would point you to the Savior."

I tweaked it a little bit.

I tweaked it a little bit. There is still an extra syllable in the third line so I'll try and mess with it a bit more. Thanks for pointing that out! And thanks for commenting. :)

Damaris Ann | Thu, 10/15/2015

My thoughts are not your thoughts, neither are your ways my ways, saith the Lord. For as the heavens are higher than the earth, so are my ways higher than your ways, and my thoughts than your thoughts.
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭55:8-9‬