Carry On

A Poem By Damaris Ann // 10/13/2015

When life is rough it's hard to be tough,
But we must carry on.
We must remember that He is enough;
So we can carry on.
He has given the strength that we need
To bravely carry on.
So we will run and joyfully speed
Our cross to carry on.

Comments

:)

Hey! Nice message :)
Very short, but good. It took me a few (five!) reads to get the rhythm, but once I had it it was great :)

Maddi | Wed, 10/14/2015

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Thank you Maddi! Also, I

Thank you Maddi! Also, I haven't forgotten you. :) I've been meaning to email you for a while now. I promise I will!

Damaris Ann | Wed, 10/14/2015

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

A great reminder of a

A great reminder of a poem!
The only thing is the rhythm is sort of off on the third line.

Arthur | Wed, 10/14/2015

"My greatest wish for my writing is that it would point you to the Savior."

I tweaked it a little bit.

I tweaked it a little bit. There is still an extra syllable in the third line so I'll try and mess with it a bit more. Thanks for pointing that out! And thanks for commenting. :)

Damaris Ann | Thu, 10/15/2015

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

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