Musical

A Poem By Damaris Ann // 5/18/2016

Lightning flashes across the sky,
Thunder rumbles a lullaby;
Soft and deep, very sweet and low,
Wind hums along, breathy and slow.
Tree branches gently dip and sway;
Waltzing the moonlit night away.
Raindrops kissing the cool night air,
Stars twinkling with light-beams fair.
Rustic theatre sets the scene
For a concert and play serene.
Handiwork of a mighty Lord:
A musical you can afford.

Comments

How lovely! It paints such a

How lovely! It paints such a vivid scene... I can almost smell a storm coming, the rain in the air... After reading I feel like I could close my eyes and be surrounded by that music.... Gorgeous! Love the rythme as well!

Kassady | Thu, 05/19/2016

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Aww thanks, Kass!!!

Aww thanks, Kass!!!

Damaris Ann | Thu, 05/19/2016

My thoughts are not your thoughts, neither are your ways my ways, saith the Lord. For as the heavens are higher than the earth, so are my ways higher than your ways, and my thoughts than your thoughts.
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭55:8-9‬

The rhythm in this is

The rhythm in this is perfect, & I love your word choice...the whole piece is so melodic! My favorite bit has to be Tree branches gently dip and sway;
Waltzing the moonlit night away.
So many plush words just in that sentence alone! It's like a lullaby, this work--very nice!

Madeline | Thu, 05/19/2016

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

Wow!

Thank you so much! High praise indeed.

Damaris Ann | Thu, 05/19/2016

My thoughts are not your thoughts, neither are your ways my ways, saith the Lord. For as the heavens are higher than the earth, so are my ways higher than your ways, and my thoughts than your thoughts.
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭55:8-9‬

I really like this! So

I really like this! So pretty.

Hannah D. | Fri, 05/27/2016

"Reason itself is a matter of faith. It is an act of faith to assert that our thoughts have any relation to reality at all." - G. K. Chesterton

Thanks very much!

Thanks very much!

Damaris Ann | Fri, 05/27/2016

My thoughts are not your thoughts, neither are your ways my ways, saith the Lord. For as the heavens are higher than the earth, so are my ways higher than your ways, and my thoughts than your thoughts.
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭55:8-9‬

I LOVE this, it's so full of

I LOVE this, it's so full of feeling and I was able to picture something really awesome; God's handiwork!

Mikaela Grace | Mon, 06/13/2016

Do Justice//Love Mercy//Walk Humbly

:)

Thank you so much, Mikki! Your comment made me feel all warm inside. :) BTW I love your quote. Good reminder.

Damaris Ann | Mon, 06/13/2016

My thoughts are not your thoughts, neither are your ways my ways, saith the Lord. For as the heavens are higher than the earth, so are my ways higher than your ways, and my thoughts than your thoughts.
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭55:8-9‬

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