Musical

A Poem By Damaris Ann // 5/18/2016

Lightning flashes across the sky,
Thunder rumbles a lullaby;
Soft and deep, very sweet and low,
Wind hums along, breathy and slow.
Tree branches gently dip and sway;
Waltzing the moonlit night away.
Raindrops kissing the cool night air,
Stars twinkling with light-beams fair.
Rustic theatre sets the scene
For a concert and play serene.
Handiwork of a mighty Lord:
A musical you can afford.

Comments

How lovely! It paints such a

How lovely! It paints such a vivid scene... I can almost smell a storm coming, the rain in the air... After reading I feel like I could close my eyes and be surrounded by that music.... Gorgeous! Love the rythme as well!

Kassady | Thu, 05/19/2016

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Aww thanks, Kass!!!

Aww thanks, Kass!!!

Damaris Ann | Thu, 05/19/2016

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

The rhythm in this is

The rhythm in this is perfect, & I love your word choice...the whole piece is so melodic! My favorite bit has to be Tree branches gently dip and sway;
Waltzing the moonlit night away.
So many plush words just in that sentence alone! It's like a lullaby, this work--very nice!

Madeline | Thu, 05/19/2016

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

Wow!

Thank you so much! High praise indeed.

Damaris Ann | Thu, 05/19/2016

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

I really like this! So

I really like this! So pretty.

Hannah D. | Fri, 05/27/2016

"Reason itself is a matter of faith. It is an act of faith to assert that our thoughts have any relation to reality at all." - G. K. Chesterton

Thanks very much!

Thanks very much!

Damaris Ann | Fri, 05/27/2016

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

I LOVE this, it's so full of

I LOVE this, it's so full of feeling and I was able to picture something really awesome; God's handiwork!

Mikaela Grace | Mon, 06/13/2016

Do Justice//Love Mercy//Walk Humbly

:)

Thank you so much, Mikki! Your comment made me feel all warm inside. :) BTW I love your quote. Good reminder.

Damaris Ann | Mon, 06/13/2016

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

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