This Dance

A Poem By Elizabeth Anne // 2/18/2013

Is it the way
They move together,
Or the way
They'll dance forever?
Is it the smile
That has settled on her face,
Or his grin
That will never be erased?

As they promise eachother
That they'll never leave
And to dance for forever,
Their mothers sigh a heave.

With one voice,
With one heart,
Just two feet,
Hand in hand.

They move back and forth,
With tears in their eyes,
As two become one
And serenity flies
To the sky.

This dance never ends.

It's the way
They move together,
And the way
They'll dance forever.
It's the smile
That has settled on her face,
And his grin
That will never be erased.

This love
Can never be erased.

This dance
Goes
On
And
On.

This dance.

Comments

:)

Good poem!

It's the smile
That has settled on her face,
And his grin
That will never be erased.

This love
Can never be erased.

This dance
Goes
On
And
On.

This dance.

The On and On part was really good because how you divided it. And you wrote this whole poem well enough that I could feel that you wrote it inspired.

Lucy Anne | Tue, 02/19/2013

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

I loved this poem -- so

I loved this poem -- so pretty! :) You did a very good job on it!! :D
~Sarah

Sarah Anne | Tue, 02/19/2013

Proverbs 3:5-6
Trust in the Lord with all thine heart, and lean not unto thine own understanding.

In all thy ways acknowledge him and he shall direct thy paths

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Really nice job!

I enjoyed reading this. We have some friends who are getting married in a couple months, and it just reminded me all about weddings....beautiful...and I could tell it was an inspiration poem, too. :D

Maddi | Thu, 02/21/2013

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Thanks!

Thank you all for your comments. I'm glad you all liked it! :)
@Lucy Anne- I'm glad you liked the way it was divided. I wasn't too sure about dividing it that way at first because it kind of felt choppy when I read it aloud. The only reason I kept it was that I felt like I needed to change it and slow it down at the end. Anyways... I'm glad to hear you liked it! :)

Elizabeth Anne | Fri, 02/22/2013

See him with his books:
Tree beside the brooks,
Drinking at the root
Till the branch bear fruit.
See him with his pen:
Written line, and then,
Better thought preferred,
Deep from in the Word.
~John Piper

This is so sweet! I love it,

This is so sweet! I love it, especially

"It's the way
They move together,
And the way
They'll dance forever.
It's the smile
That has settled on her face,
And his grin
That will never be erased.

This love
Can never be erased."

little woman | Sun, 02/24/2013

The most astonishing thing about miracles is that they happen.
-G. K. Chesterton

You've been told this

You've been told this already, but this is pretty. :)

Anna | Sat, 03/09/2013

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

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