Breath of Spring

A Poem By Elizabeth // 2/17/2009

Blissfully blooming beauty sprung
Budding, arraying colours gay
Pussy willows, daisies, daffodils
Mingling fresh breath of trees

Cheerfully notes of birds fly
Amongst Mary’s eyes blue sky
Light pouring forth in great measure
In grass yellow-green with colour

Amongst the basin of watery blue
Wispy white brushstrokes flee
Droplets, sparkling, pearly rain
The whistling of wind whirls round

Blustering, fluttering shadows
Swaying, tilting boughs
Bending, leaning blades
Flying, swirling leaves

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Ohh! I love it Elizabeth. And to think you were writing it in such conditions! Lovely work.

Brianna | Tue, 02/17/2009

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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa

I love it, Elizabeth!!

I love it, Elizabeth!! Awesome job. :)
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"Elves and Dragons! Cabbages and potatoes are better for me and you. Don't go getting mixed up in the business of your betters, or you'll land in trouble too big for you." — Hamfast Gamgee (the Gaffer)

Clare Marie | Wed, 02/18/2009

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

:>)

Very pretty! My favorite part was 'Amongst the basin of watery blue, whispy white brushstrokes flee'. I like it. :)
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Hannah W. | Wed, 02/18/2009

That's

That's beautiful.
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In this sinful world there is no such thing as "peace" unless someone strong enough is willing to protect and defend it. -Norm Bomer, God's World News

Anna | Wed, 02/18/2009

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Lovely

Calm, quiet, and smooth. I like this poem. It was as beautifuly written as the things it described.

"A wizard is never late, nor is he early; he arrives presicely when he means to." Gandalf

The Brit | Thu, 02/19/2009

!!!!!!

this is so beautiful!
love,
Bernadette

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"Hold your ground! Hold your ground! Men of Gondor, of Rohan! My Brothers!I see in your eyes the same fear that would take the heart of me. when the age of men comes crashing down. But it is not this day. This day we fight! By all that you hold dear on this good earth! I bid you stand! Men of the West!" Aragorn

Bernadette | Thu, 02/19/2009

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