Descending
Lovely kisses from high circling
Sweet hugs of twirling arms swirling
Laughing with crinkling joy falling
Blanketing smoothness light paving
Silent descending bitterly lying
Downward in patterns swiftly flying
Upturned face receives gladly
Tears of clouds dropping musically
Fair hair swept about girl gaily
Hands of movement flowing briskly
Child gathers and tosses happily
Clouds of colour arraying fairly
Bare his feet wander aimlessly
Path of golden rays receiving openly
Eyes of joy gazing wonderingly
White ornaments fill glancing beautifully
Downward in patterns swiftly flying
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Lovely! I had to read it
Lovely! I had to read it through three times just to soak it in...
I loved the rhythm of it, and your use of adverbs added a very unique touch. My favorite line was "Downward in patterns swiftly flying"
I love this, Elizabeth!!
I love this, Elizabeth!! It's wonderful!!