Incomplete

A Poem By Erin // 1/13/2015

But you, you
You are the hole in my chest
The missing piece to my puzzle
The coffee in my mug
The rhythm in my step
The crack in my world.

Comments

Nice! It's great. I like the

Nice! It's great. I like the descriptions that you used.

Damaris Ann | Tue, 01/13/2015

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

Thank you!

Thank you!

Erin | Tue, 01/13/2015

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I love it! So many pictures

I love it! So many pictures in my mind that you painted..."the crack in my world".
Although short, this is wonderful.

Maddi | Tue, 01/13/2015

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Thank you! I'm glad you like

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

Erin | Tue, 01/13/2015

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Ditto to Maddi! This is so

Ditto to Maddi! This is so deeply beautiful! I love how meaningful and just Full of raw emotion you can make a short poem like this!! Love it!

Kassady | Sun, 01/18/2015

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much!

Erin | Sun, 01/18/2015

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

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