Iraella and Baeddan (title to be changed) Chapter the Fourteenth

Fiction By Erin // 5/8/2009

Chapter the Fourteenth

Dai had heard that the new girl was awake. He had not been allowed to see her, though he didn’t understand why. He was thirteen now, he was completely responsible! “Maybe I can see her now,” thought Dai.
Ello, Dai’s sister, danced fluidly into the dining room. “Can I meet her now?” Dai asked impatiently. Ello laughed. “Patience, young one. You will meet her when the time is right,” she said. Her voice was light and airy, with a slight feeling of mysteriousness. Dai rolled his eyes and shrugged it off, resting his elbows on the table. Ello always did that after she had one of her “visions.”
Mabon entered the room from the deck door, letting sunlight flow into the room. “How is she doing?” he asked, worry in his eyes. “Calm yourself, Mabon,” Ello said, smiling. “She is awake and a little scared, but health wise she is doing great.”
Mabon sighed with relief.
“Why is she scared? And why is she always ‘the girl’ or ‘she’? Does she have a name?” Dai blurted, only asking a small percentage of his questions. Ello smiled airily. “She claims her name is Allae, she is scared because she hardly knows where she is, and no one ever says her name because no one ever thinks about it,” she told him.
Dai sighed with satisfaction and leaned back against his wooden chair. He was content with that for now.

“Oh! I’m not supposed to be here, I’m NOT supposed to be here!” Iraella said as she paced back and forth across the well swept bamboo floors. “Oh my goodness!”
She brought her fingertips to her temples and stopped to rub them. No headaches were allowed. “Calm down Iraella, you’ll get to that forest. You’ll get to Baeddan,” she thought. She plopped onto the white bedding and laid there for a few moments, trying to ward off her headache.
Then Mabon entered the room. Iraella shot up, her eyes wide. Mabon smiled. “So you’re feeling better!” he said. Iraella nodded, staring at him. He looked very different from how she had seen him in Neygren. He had been clothed in tattered grey rags, but now he had blue jeans and a silky blue and white shirt on, as well as a sky blue hat with a golden thread popping out at the top.
While Iraella studied Mabon, there was an awkward silence. Finally, Mabon cleared his throat and brought his hand up to his mouth, just to break the silence. “Um, your name is Allae, correct?” he asked uncertainly.
“Yes. And yours is Mabon?” she answered. Mabon nodded, rubbing the back of his neck. “Good, well….I-um…..I’ll be going. Mumma and my brother should be a-coming t’ see you soon. I am glad you’re doing well,” Mabon said, leaving the room.
“Okay,” Iraella said, officially deciding that this would be an awkward stay.

Comments

Yea, chapter 14. Lovely

Yea, chapter 14. Lovely chapter. Very nice indeed.

"Here are the beauties which pierce like swords or burn like cold iron." C.S.Lewis

airlia | Fri, 05/08/2009

"It is foolish and wrong to mourn the men who died. Rather we should thank God such men lived."
General George S. Patton

Thank you =) ~Erin~ "I find

Thank you =)

~Erin~

"I find myself after the whole day ends in my hotel room just laughing. Just laughing, at nothing. Just laughing." -My HERO, Adam Lambert

Erin | Sat, 05/09/2009

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Awesome chapter

Wow I want to read the whole book now lol. I stumbled on this page searching for analysing tools for students writing to use in an assignment and saw this. I just had to comment. Well done. Intrigue suspense the whole kit and caboodle.

Anonymous | Sat, 05/09/2009

Thanks so much :D ~Erin~ "I

Thanks so much :D

~Erin~

"I find myself after the whole day ends in my hotel room just laughing. Just laughing, at nothing. Just laughing." -My HERO, Adam Lambert

Erin | Sat, 05/09/2009

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Awkward stays are always

Awkward stays are always interesting. How long is she going to awkwardly stay there? Also, this may be obvious, but who is Adam Lambert, are you in love with him, and why are you? And is that his picture on your icon?

"Life is a series of idiots all trying to be more profound than the last idiot. And in a moment someone will come along and try to say something more profound than what I have just said." - unknown, to me anyway.

Bridget | Sat, 05/09/2009

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya

I'm not sure how long she

I'm not sure how long she will be awkwardly staying there.....
Adam Lambert is awesome and on American Idol. Yes, he is the picture on my icon. I've never met him, but he's so sweet on the show!!! And he can sing like crazy!!!!!

~Erin~

"I find myself after the whole day ends in my hotel room just laughing. Just laughing, at nothing. Just laughing." -My HERO, Adam Lambert

Erin | Sun, 05/10/2009

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Oh, and also, I am in love

Oh, and also, I am in love with him---but in more of a shameless fangirl sorta way XD

Rock on!

~Erin~

"I find myself after the whole day ends in my hotel room just laughing. Just laughing, at nothing. Just laughing." -My HERO, Adam Lambert

Erin | Sun, 05/10/2009

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Very nice....:) Awkward

Very nice....:) Awkward indeed. :P
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I've never seen a purple cow,
I never hope to see one.
But I can tell you anyhow;
I'd rather see than be one.

Sarah | Sun, 05/10/2009

"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca

Blogging away!
busyscribbler.wordpress.com

Yes, that's what I was going

Yes, that's what I was going for ;) BTW, I love your quote!

Rock on!

~Erin~

"I find myself after the whole day ends in my hotel room just laughing. Just laughing, at nothing. Just laughing." -My HERO, Adam Lambert

Erin | Sun, 05/10/2009

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I guess Adam is kinda cute,

I guess Adam is kinda cute, but he looks like he wears more makeup than I do. He does sound sweet though.

"Life is a series of idiots all trying to be more profound than the last idiot. And in a moment someone will come along and try to say something more profound than what I have just said." - unknown, to me anyway.

Bridget | Sun, 05/10/2009

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya

OoOo, he liiikes her... :)

OoOo, he liiikes her... :) :) :D
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"I for one am getting bored, and boredom is something up with which I will not put!" ~Phineas and Ferb

Anna | Sun, 05/10/2009

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

I love your quote,

I love your quote, Anna.

"Life is a series of idiots all trying to be more profound than the last idiot. And in a moment someone will come along and try to say something more profound than what I have just said." - unknown, to me anyway.

Bridget | Sun, 05/10/2009

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya

Thanks- I'm rather fond of

Thanks- I'm rather fond of it myself! :) Yours made me laugh.
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"I for one am getting bored, and boredom is something up with which I will not put!" ~Phineas and Ferb

Anna | Sun, 05/10/2009

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Thanks. If you know who

Thanks. If you know who said my quote, please let me know, because I have no idea, and I kind of thought of it, but I'm almost positive someone before me has said it and I don't want to take credit for someone else's quote.

"Life is a series of idiots all trying to be more profound than the last idiot. And in a moment someone will come along and try to say something more profound than what I have just said." - unknown, to me anyway.

Bridget | Sun, 05/10/2009

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya

Anna: Tee-hee! I love your

Anna: Tee-hee! I love your quote too.
Bridget: I dunno who said yours, but it's fuuunny!!! Well, he doesn't usually wear that much makeup.....He does wear guyliner though

~Erin~

"I find myself after the whole day ends in my hotel room just laughing. Just laughing, at nothing. Just laughing." -My HERO, Adam Lambert

Erin | Sun, 05/10/2009

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I think Mabon likes her too.

I think Mabon likes her too. ;)
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If I disappear, and you cannot find me, please don't worry.
Just be sure to check all the wardrobes.

Clare Marie | Mon, 05/11/2009

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Very good

Very, very good :) Of course, I'm still hoping that she'll end up with Baeddan. Wait. taht's what you wanted us to think and then you'll marry her off to this other guys and make Baeddan fall in love with that fairy thing he was painting and then they'll have this giant fight with the dark things and then....Darth Vader will cut off Luke's hand...AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Ok, I know VERY random, but hey...I'm a random person. Sorry if I saw through your evil author ideas for this :D
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"Yes, words are useless! Gobble-gobble-gobble-gobble-gobble! Too much of it, darling, too much! That is why I show you my work! That is why you are here!" --Edna Mode (the Incredibles)

Ariel | Mon, 05/11/2009

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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville

Clare: Really? OFG: No, you

Clare: Really?
OFG: No, you have not seen through my evil author plans!!!!! But you are right, Darth Vader will cut off Luke's head.

~Erin~

"I find myself after the whole day ends in my hotel room just laughing. Just laughing, at nothing. Just laughing." -My HERO, Adam Lambert

Erin | Mon, 05/11/2009

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

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