Remnants

A Poem By Erin // 9/22/2015

[this has been redacted for possible publication. I will repost if it doesn't get into the college lit mag.]

Comments

Absolutely a feast to read,

Absolutely a feast to read, with my tea and raisin bread :) You are such a master of scattered imagery that ties together to create a whole. I wasn't expecting the rigid collar of a uniform after hearing "thick-rimmed glasses", so those two things solidly created a picture of him in my mind. And my favorite delicious part was the rickety swingset and cinnamon skin. Thanks for this!

Sarah Bethany | Wed, 09/23/2015

Wow, thank you so much!

Wow, thank you so much!

Erin | Wed, 09/23/2015

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I was inspired and called

I was inspired and called skin cinnamon the other day, too. Whoops. ^-^

Sarah Bethany | Thu, 09/24/2015

Ah! That's so good to hear!

Ah! That's so good to hear! :0)

Erin | Thu, 09/24/2015

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Mm, lovely!!! What a lovely,

Mm, lovely!!! What a lovely, slightly bitter-sweet picture you painted! Very well done!

Kassady | Tue, 09/29/2015

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Thank you!

Thank you!

Erin | Tue, 09/29/2015

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Oh goodness, Erin. This is

Oh goodness, Erin.

This is gorgeous.

"kaleidoscope"

Whenever I hear that word I always think of you, Erin :)

"February car windows"

Ahh, theres something magical about open car windows, is there not? I think there is. I'm going to use that. If you don't mind, hehe.
And this was beautiful:
"and the sun filtered through
your thick-rimmed glasses"
You are getting so good as writer, Erin. Your ability to convey imagery and your thoughts has grown so much. I'm so glad I've been able to witness that!

Maddi | Sat, 10/03/2015

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Oh goodness, Erin. This is

Oh goodness, Erin.

This is gorgeous.

"kaleidoscope"

Whenever I hear that word I always think of you, Erin :)

"February car windows"

Ahh, theres something magical about open car windows, is there not? I think there is. I'm going to use that. If you don't mind, hehe.
And this was beautiful:
"and the sun filtered through
your thick-rimmed glasses"
You are getting so good as writer, Erin. Your ability to convey imagery and your thoughts has grown so much. I'm so glad I've been able to witness that!

Maddi | Sat, 10/03/2015

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Thank you so much!

Thank you so much!

Erin | Sun, 10/04/2015

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

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