Jaiden: Part 1

Fiction By Erin // 12/2/2008

I was sitting alone in my room one night, gazing at the stars from my window like they always do in sappy books I've read when it came. Or should I say when HE came. My, he was beautiful. Perfect and purely white with dazzling blue eyes. The only problem was the person that rode him..........

Hi, I am Princess Jaiden Amari Luxsnarion of Marriorn, and on my sixteenth birthday my father notified me that for my present he arranged a marriage to the prince of Baska.

Prince Ulises of Baska is a true....erm.....donkeybutt. The only thing that's good about him is his horse. A true white, absolutely gorgeous, called Ignacio.

So, as you may be able to see so far, I haven't been having a very good month, so let us continue to pity me as we move along...........

I knew who it was on that white horse's back, and I didn't want him here.

"Princess Jaiden, my queen, come!" Ulises called up to my tower window. Sometimes I wish there wasn't a door up this thing.

"How're you gonna get me?" I called back down with terrible slang to scare him.

I looked to him and saw the look on his pretty little face. Green eyes wide and mouth gaping, I laughed out loud.

"What is the problem with you?" Ulises yelled at me, his shock turning to fury.

I laughed out loud again. "What's the problem with me? What's the problem with you with you?"

I swear there was smoke coming out of his ears now.

"I will speak to your father about this, Jaiden!" Ulises yelled.

"Feel free," I said. As horrible as this sounds, it was quite fun.

I heard Ulises make a frusterated sound. I had a feeling he had never been rejected before.

And so I left my window and lay on my bed. Well, this was a remotely successful night, I thought. Perhaps my father would reject him for his rudeness to me, his beloved youngest daughter. I know, it is awful to use his affection towards me for my own ends, but oh well. But what if Ulises lied? The thought made me bolt to a sitting postion. He could say he was nothing but kind to me and I was rude and snappish. "I'm such an idiot," I said aloud. This was going to be interesting.

Comments

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Pretty good so far! ;) You're going to add more, right? I love her name, btw.

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Hannah W. | Sat, 12/06/2008

Ha! That's great. I can't

Ha! That's great. I can't wait to see how she drives him away. :P
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Sarah | Sat, 12/06/2008

"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca

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Reply to both....

Glad y'all like it so far! Yep, I'll be writing more!

"Every recording studio needs a rubber chicken." -Joe Jonas

"My red hair gives me superpowers!"-some person's t-shirt

Erin | Sun, 12/07/2008

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Ditto!

I love her name, too. The beginning made me laugh. :)
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Anna | Sun, 12/07/2008

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

=D Yay!!! "Every recording

=D Yay!!!

"Every recording studio needs a rubber chicken." -Joe Jonas

"My red hair gives me superpowers!"-some person's t-shirt

Erin | Thu, 12/11/2008

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

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