Becuase She is Proud

A Poem By Hannah W. // 10/26/2008

She was wrong--
she won't admit it
She is lonely--
she won't let you see it

She is trapped--
but she won't say so
She is sad--
but she won't cry

She is broken--
but she refuses to crack,
She is searching
for what life seems to lack

She's alone in a crowd--
but she puts on a smile
and acts fine for a while
becuase she is proud

Comments

Very well done!

This is really good!!!!!

Elizabeth | Fri, 10/31/2008

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

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wow, this is really good! i aboslutely love it. i can really relate to it.

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a creative mind never ceases for long in thinking.

Paula J | Fri, 10/31/2008

~All men were created equal, then some became Marines~
*Death smiles at everyone, Marines smile back*
gotta love the Marines!!

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Gorgeous, I really love it!

-Falling Leaves

"If life gives you lemons, throw them back!" -Joe Jonas (I think, or it might be another one of the AWESOME Jonas Brothers)

E | Mon, 11/03/2008

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond