Cold

A Poem By Hannah W. // 12/2/2008

The world is so cold,
so empty, so bare,
so bitter and gray
without sunny skies fair

But those skies have long gone,
they left along with you,
all the joy you brought to me
has now vanished too

The world is so cold,
like a stone, gone all numb
too dark to see where I'm going
or where I've come from

Where is my sunshine,
where is my light?
where is my heart?
when will my world be right?

Where is the warmth
that once filled up my soul?
Now all I have
is this harsh, empty cold.

It was a warm day before we parted,
now we're never to meet again
and I wish for the blue skies
that above us once spread

Now it is gone,
with the warmth and the light
with the joy and the hope
and now it is night

because you were my sunshine
my sunshine bright and bold
and now that you are gone away,
the world has gone so cold.

... But someday it will be dawn again,
for heaven has made it so,
the skies wil be bright and blue at last,
and nevermore shall I be cold.

Comments

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Beuatiful!
luv,
Bernadette

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"Men of Gondor, of Rohan!" Aragorn, LOTR.

Bernadette | Wed, 12/03/2008

THat was really good! >

THat was really good!
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-Elizabeth Swan//Pirates of the Caribbean//Curse of the Black Pearl

Sarah | Wed, 12/03/2008

"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca

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That is lovely in

That is lovely in a....dark...tragic...sad..
...intersting sort of way. I like it.

For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.- Audrey Hepburn

The Brit | Wed, 12/03/2008

Teartear

Sad and slightly depressing, but beautiful all the same. Love it!

"Every recording studio needs a rubber chicken." -Joe Jonas

"My red hair gives me superpowers!"-some person's t-shirt

Erin | Wed, 12/03/2008

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

...

I know! I didn't realize how sort of depressing it sounded until my mom read it and said, "well, that was a happy thought." Marsh-wiggle madness!

(Marsh-wiggles... it's a Narnia thing. The Silver Chair. Yay Puddleglum! But my mom and I always say "marsh-wiggle madness" whenever something is depressing or slightly morbid...)

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"We're going to let the hunted do the hunting while those of us who are actually the hunters go fishing. Genius!"
--Black Stache

Hannah W. | Thu, 12/04/2008

Haha, Marshwiggle madness-

Haha, Marshwiggle madness- that's good! I have a friend who's parents called him Puddleglum because he was so melancholy. :D
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"The world will likely end tomorrow - unless postponed for rain." -Tamerah (on her blog)

Anna | Thu, 12/04/2008

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Lol....

Lol, that's funny!

"Every recording studio needs a rubber chicken." -Joe Jonas

"My red hair gives me superpowers!"-some person's t-shirt

Erin | Fri, 12/05/2008

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

:D

:)
*smiles*

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The unperfect person, in the unperfect world, surrounded by unperfect people, with an absolutely perfect God!

Velocity | Mon, 12/08/2008

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