Invisibility

A Poem By Hannah W. // 10/7/2008

I've got to tell you something,
a strange story indeed,
it happened just yesterday,
when I went out, you see...

I went to town to see my friends,
but my friends did not see me.
It was such an odd feeling,
this invisibility.

It must've been the cloak I wore
that made me so transparent,
or maybe it was a trick of the light,
though I'm not so scientific

Whenever I waved or said hello
they'd no response to give,
my voice went through their ears just like
clear water through a sieve

It's sucha giddy feeling,
to be perfectly unseen,
until I got so lonely
and sad by any means

So I went back home
and shed my cloak
and here I stand

Comments

wow!

wow, that was sooo creative!!:D
LUV,
BERNADETTE

Bernadette | Wed, 10/08/2008

How in the heck did you get

How in the heck did you get the idea for that???? You have one big imagination! =] eight thumbs up! lol!

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joe jonas...the reason I forget to breathe! <3

Emily | Wed, 10/08/2008

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