Recluse

A Poem By Hannah W. // 6/1/2010

Such recluse backdropped by evening's fields
all spiky white in bloom
for fear of treading bees, wander with care;
not one for wearing shoes.

Such mind enclosed, and wreathed in sun
its glow revealing dust
more threadbare each year do we find the couch,
yet find such things, we must.

My dear, in secrecy of thought
so silently, I should--
yet I cannot disrupt the quiet hum
or a weeping dove, disturb.

A vase of amber glass reflected
so kneel, and hemmed inside
a shard of amber light refracted
through the mirror of your eye.

Ever seek the summer evening's fields
kneel among the fleshy blooms
for fear of treading bees, wander with care;
but do wander, my recluse.

 

Comments

wow!

beautiful......................beyond beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Bernadette | Wed, 06/02/2010

lovely....

This was sooo lovely.... I loved the last stanza.... this was a beautiful poem, Hannah!

Elizabeth | Wed, 06/02/2010

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The Holy Spirit is the quiet guest of our soul." -St. Augustine

 Amazing imagery - like an

 Amazing imagery - like an impressionist painting! So, so beautiful!

Mary | Wed, 06/02/2010

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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!

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Lovely.  I loved it to pieces.  The last stanza is my favorite...especially:

for fear of treading bees, wander with care;

but do wander, my recluse.

Clare Marie | Wed, 06/02/2010

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Oh...oh, oh, oh. Are thier

Oh...oh, oh, oh. Are thier words for your words? I loved this. It is breathtaking.

paperpoet | Wed, 06/02/2010

The imagery in all your

The imagery in all your writing is indescribable. You need to write a collection of poems (and include all the ones on AP!!!!) and send it straight to me!

Erin | Thu, 06/03/2010

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I second the motion!

The collection of poems suggested by Erin should be published! This is so beautiful...I could read it over and over. I think I might.

KatieSara | Fri, 06/04/2010

Katie:-)

"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS

I... third the motion! :)

I... third the motion! :)

paperpoet | Mon, 06/07/2010