cracker barrel

A Poem By Madeline // 3/17/2013

he says, 'oh, you went to cracker barrel? they have awesome breakfast there'
and it makes me smile
in its quietest form
in this room
with the four windows
making me smile
happy, thankful
for what i have on this
irish sunday
thankful for,
i guess,


This was cute :) I really

This was cute :) I really liked the first two lines, but I felt like the rest of it didn't follow the same tone. It came across as a little stiff. I still liked it though!

Erin | Sun, 03/17/2013

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond


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