He's Not My Only Sunshine, But He's Close

A Poem By Madeline // 10/19/2013

He's not my only sunshine but he's close
He touches where the rays never do
I soak them in
I soak him in
They equally manage to break through
My skin is putty in their hands
Or liquid, if they please
But whereas the sun's touch is vital
His is all I need

Comments

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Beautifully written! What powerful wording. NEVER stop writing poetry! It's the best release in the word.

Kassady | Sun, 10/20/2013

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

This is beautiful and such a

This is beautiful and such a great analogy! Write what you feel like writing-I like all of it. :)

Erin | Sun, 10/20/2013

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Heh

I know someone like that, actually...
Beautifully done, I must say.

Gina I. | Sun, 10/20/2013

insert something inspiring

Thank you all. <3 :)

Thank you all. <3 :)

Madeline | Sun, 10/20/2013

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

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Don't apologise! This is really sweet and cute and I enjoyed reading it.
Oh, and I did the essay thing!!

Maddi | Tue, 10/22/2013

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

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