Reap What You Sow

A Poem By Madeline // 1/30/2014

I can't rationalize the welling
Disappointment in my throat
I'll never be like them, you know
Far away I'm a blur in your vision
Up close I move to the peripheral
If only I could finally reap what I sow

But dear, quite frankly
If it involves you I don't

Comments

I like the vibe, but I see

I like the vibe, but I see what you mean about the rhythm. The first three lines seemed to have one going, but then it changed on the fourth. I'll bet if you keep messing with it, you can figure it out :)

Erin | Sat, 02/01/2014

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Thanks!

Thanks!

Madeline | Sat, 02/01/2014

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

Ditto to Erin!

Ditto to Erin! But the rhythm didn't throw me off that much. It was nice! I liked it a lot!!!!

Kassady | Sat, 02/01/2014

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Ditto to Kassady!!

The rhythm didn't throw me off either.
I really liked this!

"But dear, quite frankly
If it involves you I don't"

Ooh, I just really like that.

Maddi | Tue, 02/04/2014

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

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