Smile

A Poem By Madeline // 12/6/2013

Yes, my hands are in the air
Above my head
Closed eyes wide smile

Yes, for now they're in the air
All in my head
Closed mind wide smile

Yes, right now I'm in the air
Around my head
Closed mouth wide smile

Yes, my feet are on the ground
Above the core
Open eyes failing smile

Yes, for now they're on the ground
All in the core
Open mind failing smile

Yes, right now they're on the ground
Around the core
Open mouth no smile

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uiJqSgW1Ew4

Accompanying music! ;)

Madeline | Fri, 12/06/2013

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

Love-

Love Say Something!!! Good song! And this was definitely an interesting poem, I didn't really understand it, or the repetitiveness. But I liked your word choices!
"Open eyes failing smile" Mmmm!

Kassady | Mon, 12/09/2013

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

This reminds me of Lorde's

This reminds me of Lorde's song "Team". That's a nice song.

j. Glen pollard | Mon, 12/09/2013

"The trip is a difficult one. I will not be myself when I reach you."-When I Reach Me.

I love Team. So much. It's

I love Team. So much. It's great. :) Thank you! And Kass, thank you as well! It's very vague, I know. haha

Madeline | Mon, 12/09/2013

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

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