Stupid

A Poem By Madeline // 3/5/2014

I was hit with the sudden this morning
The sudden feeling of how stupid this is
I want to talk to you
This should have never happened
And we both have blame to bear

It's just really ridiculously pointless
For things to take such turns
We were all friends at one point
I wish we were for what it's worth
So there's that

It's going to take some adjustment
Being without somebody
There are times when I miss you so strongly
And others when I think that I didn't even
Truly know who you were

The tears have dried and petered off
Behind it follows a flailing injustice
It just had to go sour, didn't it
I guess you agreed to let it
And I did even if I said I didn't

But you know what you should be here
We should have laughed a thousand more times
Done a thousand more things together
Watched movies, videos at night
But those things no longer coincide

Just stupid
Is what this is
A petty word
A petty end
It's all so plain stupid

Comments

YES. I was feeling this way

YES. I was feeling this way just a couple of days ago!!! I love this so much.

Erin | Wed, 03/05/2014

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Love!!!

I feel like I might know the back story on this poem, and the wording and passion was fabulous!
"There are times when I miss you so strongly
And others when I think that I didn't even
Truly know who you were

Completely relate to this, in a completely different way, and the words struck my heart :( very good!
Well done! And dont promise anything of the sort!!! Love your posts!!!

Kassady | Wed, 03/05/2014

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

I love this!

Yes, I really really do like this. The first two stanzas are so good.
"It's just really ridiculously pointless"
Yes, sometimes it is.

Maddi | Sun, 03/09/2014

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

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