Victory Dance

A Poem By Madeline // 3/18/2014

Whoa
Is that really happening
Is he looking at me
You swear he is
You look again
And the guy's still looking
Okay, take a breath
Pace yourself and smile
Give it until you're past his
Head-on view
And then you can look again when
You're almost at the doors and
Yep
He's turned his head to follow you
You kind of are dying to do a
Victory dance
Right there in the Wal-Mart parking lot
Except
What if he was staring because something was
Stuck to your shirt or something or
Stop
You know what
You're just going to go with the former

Comments

Lol, this is too cute. I love

Lol, this is too cute. I love that feeling :)

Erin | Tue, 03/18/2014

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Ahh this is the cutest thing

Ahh this is the cutest thing ever! This is one of the most wondrous feelings in the world and you portrayed it quite wonderfully!

Flying Past Clouds | Thu, 03/20/2014

Love!

Like I said on Skype, I love this little poem SO much! I can definitely relate to this feeling, and it's an awesome feeling *flips hair and bats eyes* lol :P
Love it!!!!
You kind of are dying to do a
Victory dance

Favorite line of all!!! Love, love, love!!!!

Kassady | Fri, 03/21/2014

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
---
Write On!

Love!

Like I said on Skype, I love this little poem SO much! I can definitely relate to this feeling, and it's an awesome feeling *flips hair and bats eyes* lol :P
Love it!!!!
You kind of are dying to do a
Victory dance

Favorite line of all!!! Love, love, love!!!!

Kassady | Fri, 03/21/2014

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
---
Write On!

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