Walking On the Trail At Six-Fifteen

A Poem By Madeline // 9/21/2015

It's odd to walk under a
Stitchless blue sky
The pavement so steady
The pathway tree-lined
Two years into the fact
A thin trail of
The only

I pinched my fingers on a dress
Imagining a time
When we pledged to be
Drawn outside the lines
And look at captures
Of myself
It doesn't feel like time
Could have lent me
Any more
To refresh
What sense was mine

It's like a different person,
It's odd and strange and wrong
I cringe at what
I knew to be
My chemistry
Cells and bones and
Shrieks and phones and
Hair cut above the ears
Unique and weird but
Just one tier
I know what tastes like

The loss is hard to
Paint in words
I remember how that felt
Like your skin was pulled
While you reared back
Trying to find

It was an ocean
Ocean swell
Engulfing you quickly
And as you sank
Into the deep
You looked for that

It came on
At times so strong
A baleful potpourri
But as the clock
Ticked on; and months
So did we

Now I stand
More in my feet
Than I think I've ever been
So that when I am doused
In memories

I find I'm glad
They're that


I loved the sentiment and

I loved the sentiment and imagery behind this! "A stitchless blue sky" what a pristine image.

E | Mon, 09/21/2015

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

"A baleful potpourri"!!!!

"A baleful potpourri"!!!! Gorgeous!! And "stitchless blue sky" jumped out at me with utter delight, too.

Sarah Bethany | Wed, 09/23/2015

So fabulous!!!! Mmmm, this

So fabulous!!!! Mmmm, this was stitchless! Loved loved loved it!

Kassady | Tue, 09/29/2015

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
Write On!

"Like your skin was

"Like your skin was pulled
While you reared back"

Ooh, vivid.

"I pinched my fingers on a dress
Imagining a time
When we pledged to be

That reminded me of SO many things. Beautiful and sentimental poetry.

Maddi | Sat, 10/03/2015

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh


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