Down with the Bloody Red Queen!

A Poem By Kassady // 2/9/2011

Here I stand in my evening dress,

A dress of crimsin, yes, yes.

 

I look down upon the many things,

I tried and tried to keep out of this dream.

 

Yes, I look down upon, that which what was mine,

If my sister had not taken over like a holy shrine!

 

Ha! Why do they love her best!

I am, and always will be the Eldest!

 

Her head is so tiny, so shrunken and crude,

I'm much more beautiful... Even if I'm rude!

 

She calls herself a queen! Bah!

She calls herself the rightful heir, well Tah, Tah!

 

I've had enough of this Rable and Ruckus, you've made with such Gall

So it's time to exterminate you once and for all!

 

I'll make it a clean cut, I'll do it quit nicely,

Yours head's will tumble like the three tails of the three blind micey's.

 

So, who is your champion sister?

I'll make sure their wounds fester and blister!

 

Hello Um! I see you truely!

Your nothing but an Alice, And I'll make sure your treated cruelly!

 

So here 'ith come the Jaberwocky

And here sit I on my throne, watching with mocky.

 

But! The treatery! The Hatter pops in,

And cuts my Jaberwock's tail like all his fine ribbon.

 

"OFF WITH HIS HEAD!" I yell with such force,

Red Knight and I watch our troops, me on a throne and he on a horse.

 

ALAS! I watch, with great horror and strife,

The Jabberwocky's head has been cut by that Vorpal knife!

 

I scream in terror, I moan and I grumble,

As I watch the severed head, down broken stairs, it does tumble.

 

And OH! The white demon! comes smugly over,

I walk forward, angry and and no cover!

 

With a gasp of surprise, I feel my lovely crown,

Lifted off and placed on her's by the famous cat of the town.

 

And with a great cry, so loud and so keen,

Everyone shots, "Down with the Bloody Red Queen!"

 

 

 

 

Comments

I. Love. This.

WOW!!!! KASSADY!!! THIS IS AMAZING!!! I was sucked right in and hung to to very last word...beautifully done! Funny....loved it

Madeline | Wed, 02/09/2011

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

And I am right there with

And I am right there with them: "DOWNAL WYTH THE BLUDDY BEHG HID!" (as it is in Outlandish).

This is one of my favorite ever movies. :) I liked how the Red Queen was rather complex, with her questions about fear and love.

Anna | Mon, 02/14/2011

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief

Thank 'Ee!

I know! I loved the movie extremely! One of my fav's! After Prince of Persia and Sorcerer's Apprentice, of course!

Glade you liked it!

Write on!

Kassady | Mon, 02/14/2011

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Thank 'Ee!

I know! I loved the movie extremely! One of my fav's! After Prince of Persia and Sorcerer's Apprentice, of course!

Glade you liked it!

Write on!

Kassady | Mon, 02/14/2011

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Ahh, I love that movie :)

Ahh, I love that movie :) great job!

Erin | Tue, 02/15/2011

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

thanks! :D

Thanks! :D

Kassady | Tue, 02/15/2011

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Loved this!

I have not yet seen the movie, but even so this is a fantastic poem! I loved how it flowed and the story that it told! This is just awesome and beautiful! Keep up the great work!

Wings of Eternity

Wings of Eternity | Tue, 04/12/2011

"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12