The Symphony

A Poem By KatieSara // 4/30/2009

Sound of a harp
Fairy strings
Hidden elfin choirs sing
Songs unheard by men take wing
Music of a moonlit forest

Song of colors
Drops of rain
All the heavens in a soaring refrain
For which to listen would be in vain
Music of the rainbows

Medley of smiles
Trusting eyes
A guardian angel's lullaby
A sweet little face turned up to the sky
Music of a child's love

Symphony of wonder
For all to hear
Song of laughter, song of tears
All creation singing clear
Music of all beauty

Comments

I love this!!! "Sound of a

I love this!!!

"Sound of a harp/
Fairy strings/
Hidden elfin choirs sing/
Songs unheard by men take wing/
Music of a moonlit forest/"

Job well done. :)
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If I disappear, and you cannot find me, please don't worry.
Just be sure to check all the wardrobes.

Clare Marie | Sat, 05/02/2009

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

Thanks! Love your signature,

Thanks!
Love your signature, btw. :-D
~~~^@
Katie:-)

"We never need to be economical in our imaginations, thank heaven."
-Anne Blythe, "Anne of Ingleside"

KatieSara | Sat, 05/02/2009

Katie:-)

"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS

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So beautiful! I really love this piece, and it really does reflect a symphony. :) I like how everything fit together and flowed. Good job.

Brianna | Sat, 05/02/2009

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"We have been created for greater things. Why stoop down to things that will spoil the beauty of our hearts?" ~Mother Theresa

This piece has great rhythm

This piece has great rhythm and it flows really well! No stumbling places at all, really. :)

(I also like your signature, Clare Marie! ;)

Sarah B. | Sun, 05/03/2009

Dropping by here to say that

Dropping by here to say that this poem, with one slight change, is going to be published in an anthology called "Of Faith and Inspiration," by the Live Poets Society of New Jersey. It's all poems by teenagers about faith, God, nature etc. I'm super excited! It's scheduled to be published sometime in June. :-D

KatieSara | Sun, 03/21/2010

Katie:-)

"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS

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