A Poem By Kay J Fields // 3/27/2009

Jesus calmed the storm
And sent away the rain
The clouds cleared off
And the sun shined again
He healed the blind beggar
He broke the hearts of stone
He raised a girl from the dead
And gathered those who where alone
He saved a soldiers servant
A friend from beneath a wave
He was perfect and then condemned
And for us His life He gave
He went away to heaven
And from there now watches on
And when we call for guidance
He says “Wait, I won’t be long.”



Good poem. "He was perfect and the condemned/And for us His life He gave". Yep, I like it. =)

~My God is mighty to save~

Paula J | Fri, 03/27/2009

~All men were created equal, then some became Marines~
*Death smiles at everyone, Marines smile back*
gotta love the Marines!!

I like it. Good job.

I like it. Good job. :)
"Sing as if no one is listening;
Dance like no one is watching;
Live as if you will die tomorrow;
Love like it will never hurt."
-Old Irish Saying

Clare Marie | Sat, 03/28/2009

"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." -Bilbo Baggins [The Lord of the Rings]

My favorite line was He

My favorite line was He broke the hearts of stone... It made me read the poem again to make sure I'd gleaned it fully. :)
My work here is done.

Anna | Sat, 03/28/2009

I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right. --The Book Thief


I didnt expect so many comments this soon.Thank you. And 'He broke the hearts of stone' is probably my favorite line too.
"He's not a TAME Lion"-Mr. Beaver C.S. Lewis

Kay J Fields | Sat, 03/28/2009

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