Rainbow; an acronym

A Poem By Kay J Fields // 9/21/2009


(An acronym)


Rain is falling to the ground,

Anywhere and everywhere I see water dripping down.

I look up and search the sky of clouds.

Now I see a place where sun beams fall through,

Brilliant shades of red, orange, yellow, green, and the rest,

One after the first flowing in a breathtaking arch of colors,

Wonderful and glorious is God’s great creation,




Pretty,  Kay--I like

LoriAnn | Mon, 09/28/2009

 A clever concept - and very

 A clever concept - and very well executed!  I liked how you said "One after the first" rather than using the old, cliched, "one after the other".


Mary | Wed, 09/30/2009

Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!


Thanks! i really didnt think about it at the time, Mary Its just what I wrote.

Kay J Fields | Wed, 09/30/2009

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