Secret Things

A Poem By Kay J Fields // 4/28/2009

Down in the deep
Water dragons keep
Up in the sky
Dragon wings fly
Underneath the sun
Dragons run
Below on the earth
Dragons full of mirth
Down in the deep
Secrets keep
Up in the sky
Secrets fly
Underneath the sun
Secrets run
Below on the earth
Secrets of mirth
Not too far away
Dragon Secrets stay

Comments

mmmhmm, dragons are cool. I

mmmhmm, dragons are cool. I love dragons. great poem; very expressive.

"Oh lovely snowball, packed with care
Smack a head that's unaware.
Then with freezing ice to spare
Melt and soak through underwear!
Fly straight and true, hit hard and square.
This, oh snowball, is my prayer." - Calvin, from Calvin and Hobbes

Bridget | Wed, 04/29/2009

"I always wonder why birds stay in the same place when they can fly anywhere on the earth. Then I ask myself the same question." - Harun Yahya

nice. I liked how you did

nice. I liked how you did the almost reapet thing
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"There's a differnce between food and a meal."
-My bro and I have no idea what it means either

Keri | Thu, 04/30/2009

very cool!

I like it! It reminds me of the Dragon Keepers Chronicles by Donita K. Paul. :)

~~~^@
Katie:-)

"We never need to be economical in our imaginations, thank heaven."
-Anne Blythe, "Anne of Ingleside"

KatieSara | Thu, 04/30/2009

Katie:-)

"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS

Love this!

Very cool, Kay J!

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
"I cain't be sure in the dark, but I think I blowed his head clean off."
~Grandma Lizzy - when asked what she did about the copperhead on her back porch

Mary | Thu, 04/30/2009

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Brother: Your character should drive a motorcycle.
Me: He can't. He's in the wilderness.
Brother: Then make it a four-wheel-drive motorcycle!

I like the way it kind of

I like the way it kind of repeated...but not. Good touch.

"Now you've heard of the French Nation, and the British Nation....Well this, is the Imagin Nation." Kris Kringle (Miracle on 34th Street)

The Brit | Thu, 04/30/2009

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