Desire

A Poem By Keri // 4/23/2010

 I used to love to read

It went hand in hand with to write

I used to love to lose sleep

Reading books all through the night

 

But now I don’t read as much

Even though I should

I love the stories I encounter

I find them really good

 

I find myself hesitating

To read something written well

Because every time I read something masterful

A bit of jealousy in me swells

 

Shannon Hale invents names with ease

Meg Whalen Turner holds you prisoner

Gail Carson Levine makes old stories new

They’re all actual finishers

 

James thinks and then makes you think too

Hannah W. writes sweeping poems

Sarah makes real life come alive

Anna’s page is like a second home

 

J.R.R. Tolkien wrote epic tales

C.S Lewis wrote for every age

Raymond Carver may not have written the best

But his style is beauty on a page

 

I could go on and on

I could whine and whine for hours

I could list everyone I’m jealous of

I could let it make me sour

 

Or I could instead just admire them

Without a hint of envy

I could go write and try to be like them

From them I’d learn and start improving

 

Comments

This was really good. I feel

This was really good. I feel the same a lot of times too.

Erin | Fri, 04/23/2010

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I can definitely relate to

I can definitely relate to this, inluding some of the authors you mentioned. And I love how you included some of our own AP-ers. :-D It's not just the famous published ones.

KatieSara | Fri, 04/23/2010

Katie:-)

"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS

=)

I know, right? like my friend, Erin, she writes amazing storys!!!!! =O so I often find myself asking: How in our beloved planet Mars...!... do you come up with this stuffffffffff!!!!!!!.............!!!!!!!!!

Tayme | Sat, 04/24/2010

ah, this is perhaps the most

ah, this is perhaps the most relatable piece of work on AP....  Now I'm jealous of your writing. (jks :))

Sar | Sun, 04/25/2010

<3

Keri, you're amazing!!! I don't think you have anything to be jealous of. You're way up there with those amazing authors. Seriously, if I hada CS Lewis book and a Keri book sitting side by side on my bed...I'd snap up yours FIRST THING!!!!

Ariel | Thu, 04/29/2010

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"To produce a mighty book, you must choose a mighty theme. No great and enduring volume can ever be written on the flea, though many there be that have tried it." -- Herman Melville

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