Unrequited Love

A Poem By kit-kat // 7/3/2011

Such a smile like the sun.
Blinding the heart
For love is blind
And I love you.

Such beauty as the stars
Sparkling on the ground
For they fell out of the sky
As I fell for you.

Such eyes like a river
Swiftly moving and never
Returning what they have taken;
You took my heart with you.

Such distance like a wall
For we are forever apart.
Though you're within my grasp
I cannot touch you.
 

Comments

 awwwww!!!!!!!!!! That is so

 awwwww!!!!!!!!!! That is so sweet! I love it!  <3

Renee | Thu, 07/07/2011

Beautiful

Kit-Kat,

Such beautiful and moving imagery! Since a lot of us experience unrequited love in our lives, I think this poem is going to strike a chord in a lot of people. I love your rhythm! This is one of the few non-rhyming poems that I absolutely fell in love with! Great job! Keep up the fantastic work!

Sincerely,

Wings of Eternity

Wings of Eternity | Fri, 07/08/2011

"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12

That was gorgeous-I'm glad

That was gorgeous-I'm glad you wrote it and I got the chance to read it :)

Erin | Thu, 10/20/2011

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I just read this again, and I

I just read this again, and I don't know if you ever check this site anymore, but I wanted you to know that this particular poem means a lot to me right now. I really understand it at this moment in my life, and I love it. So, kudos to you.

Erin | Wed, 07/24/2013

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

I'm so glad Erin commented or

I'm so glad Erin commented or I wouldn't have found this otherwise. Wow. Just wow. This is beautiful in a way I can't begin to describe.

Madeline | Wed, 07/24/2013

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

You girls just made my day

You girls just made my day ::) I never really use this site but I got an email because of your comments.. Thanks for reading!!

kit-kat | Fri, 07/26/2013

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