A Horse
We took a peaceful ride,
Through the country-side.
Where no busy road,
Nor a highway is in sight.
So many cattle grazing,
Along the fence lines.
I see the goats and sheep,
Eating thorns and vines that creep.
And chickens running,
Around the yard so freely.
But a beauty in the pasture ahead,
Catches my eye. What can it be?
A horse of course.
It's mane and tail blowing softly.
And a perfect white star,
On it's sun-soaked, bay head.
P.S. I need ideas for a title. Post some ideas
for me please. Thanks!
Comments
Nice job with this. I'm
Nice job with this. I'm pretty bad with titles, so I won't be of any assistance.
~Erin~
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good job Lexus. I was just
good job Lexus. I was just reading random things and found this. Very much like! :) as for a title... i really dont know. 'Horse' is just fine as it is.
Good job. I'd simply go with
Good job. I'd simply go with the original title to give the full effect. It's a mystery, it's a dream, it's a vision---it's a horse.