This way

A Poem By Madeline // 1/29/2017

A wealth of life
bubbles from the spring
of your eyes
Hands sing
out to me
They speak
my language
Distinct
in the rhythms and patterns
They make
an offering
that only my cerebral cortex
can navigate
A messaged devoted entirely
to Me.

This heart races
and quakes
when you talk
This way

Comments

Ohhhhhhhhh this is so

Ohhhhhhhhh this is so gorgeous. It's soft, and sweet. Like, melt-in-your-mouth perfection. The rhythm is superb. I literally let out a satisfied sigh when I read the last line. Can I give high enough praise? This is without a doubt my %100 favorite poem you've written. Ever. Period. Thank you for that.

Damaris Ann | Tue, 01/31/2017

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

Thank you, SO SO MUCH.

Thank you, SO SO MUCH. Reading this at 7:30 am (agghh) this morning was a lovely way to start my day! <3

Madeline | Tue, 01/31/2017

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

Soooooo good.... great choice

Soooooo good.... great choice with the capitalization of "Me" -- it just felt that much more special and specific, his message devoted to you: those two lines zinged out at me!! And my heart actually felt a flutter at the last stanza <3

Sarah Bethany | Thu, 02/02/2017

PS --

-- your new profile picture is so stunning!

Sarah Bethany | Thu, 02/02/2017

SARAH. Hello & thank you! <3

SARAH. Hello & thank you! <3 I'm soooo sorry I have yet to comment on your latest chapters. School has started back, and it's been an insanely busy few weeks. Soon!

Madeline | Sat, 02/11/2017

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

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