Chapter One. The middle.

Fiction by Megan | 12/23/2007

She stared blankly into the darkness, waiting, wondering. Is he gone yet? She wondered, Is it safe?. Tears rolled down her face as she the pondered things that had happened that day...the horrible things that this man had done...but she couldn't think about that now. No. Not now. She cleared her head, closed her eyes and listened closely, holding her breath. She didn't hear his footsteps or the horrible ragged breathing that she had heard so frequinty. A sign that he was near. She opened her eyes, looking around the crowded coat-closet where she was hiding. She didn't appear to have company. Slowly, she stood up, cracking the door slightly to peek out into the hall. All clear. She stepped into the hall, limping slightly. The front door was opened and it was freezing inside the house. She closed it, stopping in her tracks when she heard footsteps behind her. She swung around quickly, her eyes wide. "You thought I was gone..." He rasped, taking a step foward. She darted toward the stairs, but he was faster, grabbing her shirt. She fell to the ground.

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Emily | Thu, 12/27/2007 - 2:02pm

WRITE MORE!!!!

Megan | Thu, 12/27/2007 - 2:55pm

Does that mean you like it??

Sarah Michal | Thu, 12/27/2007 - 4:22pm

yeah, i like it.
Maybe you should make your chapters longer, though.....................................

Emily | Thu, 12/27/2007 - 6:04pm

Me? Yah I do!

Megan | Thu, 12/27/2007 - 6:14pm

This was, sort of, in a way, the introduction...Plus, I got kicked off.

:-)
Emily-Smileygirl | Fri, 12/28/2007 - 12:48pm

Woah....................................

Megan | Fri, 12/28/2007 - 7:55pm

Was that a good or bad 'woah'?

Emily-Smileygirl | Fri, 12/28/2007 - 9:05pm

Good! Absolutely! It gave me shivers! :-)

Megan | Fri, 12/28/2007 - 11:11pm

If that made you shiver, wait until the read the other two chapters. They're ten times worse.