A Metaphor For Love and Loss

An Essay By Gina I. // 1/23/2014

Following is a little thing that just randomly popped into my head several nights ago. I hope you like it!

I love him, he loves me. I need him, he needs me. We're dancing a complicated waltz and we know each other so perfectly, it's simple. We're destined to be dancing for our lives.
A stake to the heart sends me reeling back, I'm bleeding tears. Pain consumes me, and suddenly, I no longer see him. I can't hear him, I can't feel him, I barely sense him. Nothing registers with me, as I'm being beaten to the ground by the crush of dancers. Through a haze of white noise, I hear him, calling, screaming for me. I can almost feel his touch...
And then utter, complete, total silence, broken only by my screams as I search vainly for a thread of hope to cling to, to bring me back to him. I'm lost, alone, dying from pain. The stake is soaked with my blood, it becomes a mirror, and through it I see my entire life. I rise again, stumbling, trying to run, but there's no one, nothing to run to. I am alone in the dance of life, all my family and friends having abandoned me or been torn away. I am alone in the last strains of the music. Nobody sees me fall, at last, to sleep and never awake.

Comments

*gob smacked*

HOW did you write this? Totally amazing. I had to read it again.
This should be published!! I mean it. I applaud you.

Maddi | Wed, 01/29/2014

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

ATTENTION EVERYBODY

Read the piece above!! It's an amazing one. Should be published, in my opinion.

Maddi | Wed, 01/29/2014

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Uhhh, actually

I'm not entirely sure... XD
Thank you though!

Gina I. | Wed, 01/29/2014

insert something inspiring

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