Truly Beautiful
There she is
the most beautiful girl in the world
walking down the street
every boys eyes are in her derection
but is she truly beautiful?
her hair is like a blanket of silk
swaying in the breeze
but is she truly beautiful?
her eyes are like a million shining stars
but is she truly beautiful?
her nose is the perfect size
the perfect piont
but is she truly beautiful?
her lips are like an angels
not to big
not to small
but is she truly beautiful?
her chest
her stomach
her waist
are not a millimeter out of place
but is she truly beautiful?
her legs are just the right size
perfectly long and slim
but is she truly beautiful?
she has a flawless height
but is she truly beautiful?
she is perfect on the outside
but she is not truly beautiful!
shes mean
selfish
evil
rude
hethen
revealing
and not truly beautiful!
Comments
I liked the first part of
I liked the first part of this poem a lot. The rhythm was good and the points. "To" should be "too" if you mean "excessively, " and " piont" is probably a mispelling of "point." But the ending was flat. It would have had more power if you showed the girl acting meanly and then said "not beautiful"