Deep Within My Eyes

A Poem By paperpoet // 6/15/2010

                                              

I see that same old face in the mirror
But the face has changed somehow
Something’s there that wasn’t there
Beneath my puzzled brow
I frown as I examine
What, to my surprise
Has suddenly transformed
Deep within my eyes
 They are still the same color
They have not grown in size
But now I hold a secret
Deep within my eyes
Their gaze has turned to hardened stone
The fire behind has died
There is a sad reflected soul
Deep within my eyes

 

Comments

So sad...wonderful and

So sad...wonderful and well-written, but depressing nonetheless. :(

KatieSara | Mon, 06/28/2010

Katie:-)

"Are all humans like this? So much bigger on the inside?"
-Idris/TARDIS

Wow. That was really good.

Wow. That was really good. Inspiring; sad. Over all well writtenand easy to relate to.

Mairead | Tue, 06/29/2010

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"Sweet is the love that never knew a wound, but deeper that which died and rose again." - Mother Mary Francis

Lovely...not depressing, but

Lovely...not depressing, but very...somber. I like it very much.

LoriAnn | Tue, 06/29/2010

I like it too. Very

I like it too. Very thoughtful

Julie | Wed, 06/30/2010

Formerly Kestrel

Hmmm, interesting. Good

Hmmm, interesting. Good imagery, I thought. Very simple.

Erin | Fri, 07/09/2010

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

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