I say leave him

A Poem By Paula J // 9/16/2008

Your voice quivers and shakes
as you hold back the flood of tears
you don't wanna cry
he isn't worthy of them.

You wonder why you don't
leave him,
find somebody who'll treat you right
but something holds you back
and you can't find it in you
right now to leave.

He isn't worthy of you
not if he makes you cry
I must ask, why stay? what has he done
to keep you so near?
and at night, you'll cry when you
remember the phone conversation
you'll cuss and scream, asking why you
don't leave him.

All the sweet things he's done,
his gentle kisses
will come rushing back and
everything in you that screamed to say goodbye
will run away when you
remember the good times
and you'll keep looking forwards,
forgetting those tears, those frustrating feelings
to see his tender smile
but I say it isn't enough,
he doesn't treat you right,
I say leave him.

*This is about a friend of mine, and her boyfriend.*

Comments

Teartear

That was very nice =D

Falling Leaves-unschooler, horse lover, and obsesser over writing, reading and proper grammar.

Erin | Fri, 09/19/2008

Wow! That's pretty powerful!

Wow! That's pretty powerful! I like the way you phrased things in this piece! =] Good job!
~E~

Emily | Mon, 09/22/2008

thanks

i appreciate your comments. =)

Paula J | Mon, 09/22/2008

I like it

I like it ;)
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marie (not verified) | Sat, 10/04/2008

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