Rumpelstiltskin in Bible Style, Chap. 1

Fiction By Sarah Anne // 5/29/2012

Chapter one

1. And Rapunzels sister, Hanna, was wife of Gilead, son of Hur.

2. And she bore unto him a daughter, and they called her, Leah.

3. And Hanna was sore sick, and gave up the ghost in the morn, and Gilead wept with a loud voice.

4. And Leah grew older, and there was not found one person to deny her great beauty.

5. And her father was proud, and boasted to all that would hear him that his daughter could spin straw into gold, even pure gold.

6. And this reached the ears of the king Hamad, son of Rapunzel, who had done great evil in the sight of the Lord.

7. And he was a man of great greed, and he did order the man and his daughter unto him.

8. And he asked him if what he said was true, and the man said, "yes, it is so, my king."

9. And the king ordered her to be locked up in a room, and bade her spin three tons of straw into gold, or he would slay her with the sword.

10. And Leah lifted up her voice and wept, for she knew that she could not.

11. And her father, Gilead, was struck down in the sight of the Lord, for he had broken his commandment, and taken his daughter to sure death.

Comments

I like all the "Struck

I like all the "Struck downs". They're so funny!

Anyways, good job--I felt like I was reading from the Bible (as always)!! :)

Lucy Anne | Tue, 06/05/2012

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

Lol! Thank you! :) ~Sarah

Lol! Thank you! :)
~Sarah

Sarah Anne | Tue, 06/05/2012

Proverbs 3:5-6
Trust in the Lord with all thine heart, and lean not unto thine own understanding.

In all thy ways acknowledge him and he shall direct thy paths

P.S
Go to my blog and follow it: Sarahanneandrews.wordpress.com
:) for my sake, follow

Very funny :) ROFL

Very funny :) ROFL

Aredhel Írissë | Wed, 06/06/2012

Whoa. It kinda felt like I

Whoa. It kinda felt like I was reading a lost chapter of the bible. Really good!

Flying Past Clouds | Sat, 06/09/2012

Haha :)

Thank you!! :D

Sarah Anne | Sun, 06/10/2012

Proverbs 3:5-6
Trust in the Lord with all thine heart, and lean not unto thine own understanding.

In all thy ways acknowledge him and he shall direct thy paths

P.S
Go to my blog and follow it: Sarahanneandrews.wordpress.com
:) for my sake, follow

Oh!

Oh! How interesting! This is a cool idea.

Kassady | Wed, 06/20/2012

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Thank you, Kass! :) ~Sarah

Thank you, Kass! :)
~Sarah

Sarah Anne | Wed, 06/20/2012

Proverbs 3:5-6
Trust in the Lord with all thine heart, and lean not unto thine own understanding.

In all thy ways acknowledge him and he shall direct thy paths

P.S
Go to my blog and follow it: Sarahanneandrews.wordpress.com
:) for my sake, follow

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