Soaked in the concentrated
quick of existence
this bird song
is a sugarcube
dunked in the liqueur
"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond
I just realized how the word "concentrated" goes for both ways: existence AND "liqueur" of life. Sugar-cube. Ah. Good use of words in this short poem.
When will you post Martje?
"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson
You know what's funny, I wasn't really applying it to existence myself...more to liqueur. I love that you just threw that even more beautiful spin on it.
The goal is to start posting Martje by the end of September!
Oooohh savouring every word of this.
Love it all.
Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh
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