I Wonder

A Poem By Sarah // 4/8/2009

I wonder what has happened
to the days
when life was carefree.
I wander as I wonder,
as I look, but I don't see.
Yet still I wonder,
wandering yet,
Ceaselessy searching,
for a way to get

love
truth
beauty

without

strife
hatred
pain

where can I find
the hidden virtues of the heart,
they're buried deep,
they've been ignored for so long.
Yet they've been there all along.

Comments

Wow, sad. But I like the way

Wow, sad. But I like the way you had
"love
truth
beauty"
and then countering it,

"strife
hatred
pain"

It's a little shaking, but I'm all for shaking. It's good.

"It's not who you are underneath, but what you do that defines you." from Batman Begins

The Brit | Thu, 04/09/2009

thanks. :) I was

thanks. :) I was feeling....a little discouraged when I wrote this.
Shaking? What do you mean by that?
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Sarah | Thu, 04/09/2009

"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca

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I mean if I were in any sort

I mean if I were in any sort of dreamy land, I'm not any more. But don't misunderstand me, it's a great poem.

"I always bite my flesh when I'm thinking." Alecia

The Brit | Thu, 04/09/2009

I see....not really. Oh

I see....not really. Oh well. I'll take that as a compliment and try to figure out wht you meant later. :D
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Sarah | Thu, 04/09/2009

"Sometimes even to live is courage."
-Seneca

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An interesting poem that

An interesting poem that requires a little thought - but then, I like poems that make me think! : )
"They're buried deep/they've been ignored for so long"... lovely.

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Mary | Mon, 04/13/2009

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