Darkness Gone

A Poem By SURPRISINGPERSON // 8/4/2018

There was a man in El-Qadar,
A man with silver eyes.
He said to me, "Beware the dark,
"For it will whisper lies.
"And raze the shadows of the deep;
"Lest they haunt you forevermore,
"Mock and taunt you in your sleep."

I heard his words, heard and obeyed
The man with silver eyes.
And brought His light into the dark,
So none could hear its cries
And to the evil shades that lurk,
I brought Holy Fires, that burned
The deep hazes of their murk.


Impressive! I love the

Impressive! I love the metaphors. Very well-done.

Damaris Ann | Mon, 08/20/2018

I don’t thrive off of chaos: chaos thrives off of me.

Liana, wow...this was very

Liana, wow...this was very good. I was struck by your word choice and your powerful storytelling. Thank you for sharing :)

Libby | Tue, 08/21/2018

“The gospel alone is the power of God unto salvation.
Therefore, suffer, yes. Be misunderstood, yes. Be shamed, yes. But do not be ashamed. For the joy set before you, take up your cross, follow Jesus, be shamed and despise the shame!" -- John Piper

Very good! I loved the flow

Very good! I loved the flow of it and it's message! God bless you!

Joy J. | Thu, 08/23/2018

C.S. Lewis ~ "He died not for men, but for each man. If each man had been the only man made, He would have done no less."


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