Lord, I believe (attempted hymn)

A Poem By Tessa // 12/31/2015

Lord, I believe Thy faithfulness sure:
Myself Thou shalt steadfastly secure.
With Thee in me through every trial,
Though my head droop it shall be rais’d higher.

Lord, I believe Thou orderest my way,
Come gloom or gladness; come night or day.
If my faith fail, or I should lose hope,
Thee, Lord canst bear with what I cannot cope.

Lord, I believe that weakness of mine
Is swallow’d in strength of the perfect Divine.
And Thou in Thy love givest to me
The sweet blessed Jesus: all I shall need.

Comments

Beautiful

This is beautiful, Tessa. And it flows from the profound paradox in our Christian walk... that "when I am weak, then I am strong":

"And He said unto me, 'My grace is sufficent for thee, for My strength is made perfect in weakness.' Most gladly therefore will I glory rather in my infirmities, that the power of Christ may rest upon me.

"Therefore I take pleasure in infirmities, in reproaches, in privations, in persecutions, in distresses for Christ’s sake; for when I am weak, then am I strong."

-- II Chorinthians 12:9-10

This hymn you've written speaks powerfully to a Christian who has walked through hard places and felt his utter helplessness before God.

Thanks so much for sharing this!

James | Tue, 01/05/2016

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"The idea that we should approach science without a philosophy is itself a philosophy... and a bad one, because it is self-refuting." -- Dr. Jason Lisle

After your pretty awesome

After your pretty awesome first essay here on AP, I am so happy to see you posted again! Lovely poem. I hope to see more of your works soon!

Hannah D. | Tue, 01/05/2016

"Reason itself is a matter of faith. It is an act of faith to assert that our thoughts have any relation to reality at all." - G. K. Chesterton

Beautiful, Tessa. Poetry that

Beautiful, Tessa.
Poetry that comes from the heart in a time of need is such a gift. It's when the Holy Spirit senses a need for comfort, and this is His way of giving it. It's happened to me many times. It's usually when I'm feeling lost or alone, and then that Still Small Voice whispers into your heart and says "I am here, and I am enough."
I hope you continue to write poetry. For not being a "natural" your fisrst attempt seems pretty perfect. :) Keep up the good works!

Damaris Ann | Tue, 01/05/2016

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

:)

This is so beautiful, and a good reminder.
Since it's a hymn, do you have/are you planning on putting music to it?

Kyleigh | Wed, 01/06/2016

Hi all

I have to admit, I had forgotten I was signed up for this site until these comments started coming in! Thank you all for your kind words. This poem is ringing true for me more than ever now. God continually reaffirms his goodness and faithfulness to me.

I wasn't planning on putting music to it. The meter is such that the tune "Jesus, Thy blood and righteousness" works with it well. :) If anyone is musically inclined and wants to write a tune for it though... go for it!

Tessa | Tue, 01/19/2016

Redeemed,

Tessa

Kyleigh should do it.

Kyleigh should do it. :)

Isn't it beautiful how God gives us words to write a poem and then uses those same words to comfort/encourage/convict us later on? I've had that happen multiple times.
"The love of God is greater far than tongue or pen can ever tell."

Damaris Ann | Tue, 01/19/2016

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

:)

I can definitely give it a go. ;) Anything musical that comes to anyone's mind when they first read this? I'll think about it more later, but if anyone feels a specific mode or mood when they read it let me know.

Kyleigh | Wed, 01/20/2016

Peaceful. That's how the

Peaceful. That's how the words feel.

Damaris Ann | Wed, 01/20/2016

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

:)

It's done, but I don't know how to post a PDF anywhere.

Kyleigh | Wed, 01/27/2016

I'll take one.

I'll take one.

Lucy Anne | Wed, 01/27/2016

"It is not the length of life, but the depth of life." Ralph Waldo Emerson

I wouldn't be any help with

I wouldn't be any help with that. I am so not techy. :P but I can't wait to see what you've got!

Damaris Ann | Wed, 01/27/2016

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.

I'm not too familiar with the

I'm not too familiar with the apricot pie platform, but maybe if you convert it to a picture file (.jpg, .png, or something else?) you can finagle it in? I'd like to see what you've come up with. :)

Tessa | Wed, 01/27/2016

Redeemed,

Tessa

Dropbox!

I remembered I have a public folder on dropbox. This should work! Let me know if it doesn't.
The chords listed are not necessarily guitar chords but are from my outline after I wrote the melody. So they would loosely work for guitar but would probably need a few cut out.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/1n1i7guzcaz9x43/Lord%20I%20believe.pdf?dl=0

Kyleigh | Thu, 01/28/2016

Wonderful! Hoping to get out

Wonderful! Hoping to get out my keyboard and give it a try later this afternoon. For now, gardening! :)

Damaris Ann | Thu, 01/28/2016

I am an overcomer through Christ alone, for the glory of God alone.